Imagine yourself as a jar of water, clear and untouched.Beside you are two bottles of food coloring. One is red, representing sin.The other is yellow, representing redemption. With each act made by you, a drop of food coloring dilutes into your no longer untouched and clear body. One by one a drop a drop is added. Now take a pause and look at yourself. What color are you, red, yellow, or orange? If orange, are you a darker orange or a lighter one? The more sin you have in your life the redder or darker your body will be. The more redemption you have the more yellow or light your body will be.
Now i’ll be honest, my body is a much darker orange. As much as i’d like to take back my sins, I cannot for they are mixed within in. The red is there to stay, but so is the yellow. I cannot separate the darkness, but I can lighten it. My goal is to essentially make up for my sins by overcoming them with redemption. With each redemption my body becomes a lighter orange. My sins never leave me, but the power that comes from redeeming, lessen the harshness of its color.
Relating this experiment to Hamlet I look to the King’s prayer to God as an example. The King, Claudius, turns to God to repent his sins in hopes to be freed of them. This is still a common act to those who worship and believe in God and is act that I respect and contribute in. However, the way Claudius repents his sins is completely ineffective especially to the project spoken above. Claudius believes that by just asking forgiveness from God, he is free of his sins. Unfortunately it is not that simple. In my religion it is encouraged to repent yours sins to God and that He shall forgive you. The catch is that yes He forgives, but that doesn’t mean that you can go back into life and repeat and make new sins. The whole point of repenting is to vulnerably put yourself before the Lord and ask Him for another chance to do right. Claudius’s sins are never gone even as much as he prays they are. They remain within him, and with his naive mind he goes back out into the world and sins more. This making his body even redder and his repentance to God worthless.
It is one thing to recognize and want to take back your sins. Its another to make up for them and exclude all those sins from your life. The red food coloring is a never leaving substance, but so is the yellow one. You get to chose the color you represent. Red, yellow, dark, or light?
Dear April,
I really enjoyed reading your blog and I find it kind of funny that we had the same idea for blogs. I can really connect to your idea of having done more sin than redemption. In your blog, one thing I think you should improve is to add a photo in the middle or add a quote. Reading block paragraphs can sometimes get distracting.
Sincerely,
Raman
Dear April,
This was a great piece and I enjoyed many aspects of it. One thing I liked is that you defined good and bad with colors and how one does not have to be one or the other but can be light or dark shades and even a combination of the two. This is a topic that stood out a lot for me as well in Hamlet so it was an interesting read to see what your opinion was on the matter.
Your writing from what I have seen continues to improve, gumps are still an work in progress but I am not one to point fingers I need a ton of work on mine. over all a great blog April.
From Marc
April,
You always take assignments like this and turn them into something so unique!! I love it
I think you wrote this very well and it flowed in a really nice way!!
I like how you related the colours to yourself and then again with Hamlet that was really good.
I agree with Marc, gumps need to be worked on a bit but we all need work on that haha
Thanks for writing this
Keelee
Dear Marc and Raman,
Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging words.I will take your helpful critiques and be conscious of them in my future blogs.
Sincerely, April